
‘You must take off your coat and dress.’
‘Pardon?’
Everyone had warned her to stay away from him. She’d insist he wasn’t bad, merely different. Yet as the icy water seeped into her boots, she wondered if she ought to have listened.
‘It won’t work if we’re dressed.’
He shrugged off his coat in a grand gesture.
‘Trust me?’
Her freezing fingers fumbled with the fastenings.
When they had shed their clothes, he touched her and turned into something else and so did she. Slipping into the water, she found it warm and breathable. Fin to fin, they swam away.
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Written for Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge #15 – yep, I finally made it. Still on the Akismet naughty list, though, so I won’t even bother commenting this week…
Reminiscent of the story of the Selki. Very good 😇
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Thanks Ellen! I definitely had selkies on my mind.
btw, I just commented on yours and as I suspected, it went straight into the spam. I’m afraid you’ll have to fish it out
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This is a great story, loved reading it.
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Yes, the Selkie!!
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A fantastic tale (pardon the pun). Hesiod or Ovid in a chapter.
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Interesting and fun to read. Great ending.
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Fascinating story. The shape – shifting is interesting Sonya.
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Glad you made it, Sonya 🙂 I like where you went with this one. Maybe your characters met up with mine 🙂
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Thanks, Jane!
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Lovely, Sonya. Slipping into the waves together – gorgeous 🙂
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A beautiful beginning to a wonderful adventure!
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Thanks 😊
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ooh. an enchanting piece, Sonya!
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