He got the eyes wrong.
They are gentle creatures, cows – they were rightly chosen as vessels to convey the message of peace. He won the bid to paint them with his flower and heart-shaped leaf design.
It’s a good design: bold colours, strong symbols. It works, it emphasises the message. If it weren’t for the eyes, it’d be a triumph.
Instead of a gentle, peaceful expression, the cows’ eyes burn with hostility. He got so engrossed in the colourful depiction of love, he made a glaring mistake with their eyes – undoing the message.
And he only notices as they’re unveiled.
While the average patron thinks everything they do is absolutely brilliant, one tiny mistake will continuously haunt the artist’s dreams until it is corrected. Tis the life of the artist.
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Indeed it is. How often do I publish something I think is sub-par and I get loads of appreciative comments. Nobody will pay attention to the eyes, I reckon…
Thanks, Nortina 🙂
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They say the eyes tell all. No matter how beautiful it is packaged look to the eyes. Great story
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Thanks, Donna 🙂
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Ah, don’t you hate that? Seeing your mistakes after your work is released for public scrutiny? Like Nortina said, it’s often only the artist that sees the flaw, but it’s pure torture until it’s corrected. Nice story.
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Yes, it is torture, isn’t it? Thank you!
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How often do you notice a mistake after you hit the publish button? It is a daily torture and one that you never forget.
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Yeah, I don’t know why they never make themselves known before you hit publish… Thanks for reading, Angie!
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I know when I am working on my art, too often when I “think” I am finished, I have done something I don’t like at all but it’s too late to change it. I know how this artist feels. Wonderful story, Sonya!
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Yeah, I think every artist does… Thanks, PJ!
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I so agree with Nortina’s comments above. You’ve captured the essence of many an artist with this delightful story.
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Thank you, Graham!
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Whoops! Hopefully, no one will notice:)
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I don’t think so, he’s just being a bit overly critical of himself. Thanks for reading 🙂
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geez, that is like a typo after you publish the story. Always proof your work, that’s what I get out of this!
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Yes, but even then you miss one… I guess you can always find something to find fault with 😀
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yes, even if it isn’t a typo, a certain turn of phrase that is SO much better than the one used in the story is bound to occur to you later after publishing.
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Passive aggressive cows. Could be a problem if they got loose.
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Ooh, that’s a whole new story… The Uprising of the Cows 😀
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I tried that story once!
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😀
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chilling and yes they do have creepy eyes! That was the first thing I noticed when I saw the image!
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The one in the back in particular, it looks like it’s plotting something… Thanks Melinda 🙂
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Yes! I looked at the picture and an senryu rant started in my head–a disturbing one–centered around that shifty-eyed cow. You’re welcome 🙂
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Lovely take on the prompt!
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Thanks Kay 🙂
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Oh no after all that time and effort and he messed up on the eyes. It’s always down to the small details, that everyone will notice and puck out. I think he should have stepped back and looked at the cows before he cried fini. Great job Sonya!
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Yes, he should have… Thanks, Amanda!
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A mistake the artist will probably relive over and over, but hopefully has learned a lesson from it and will check his work more carefully next time. I think we tend to beat ourselves up on our own mistakes more than other people do. Great story.
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Yep, I think that, too. Thanks, Jessie 🙂
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Uh oh! I think he will have a hard time forgiving himself!
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Probably, but I think he’s over-reacting…
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Oh… maybe
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The eyes are a glimpse into the soul.
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So they are – he should have paid more attention.
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I think what I love most about these photo challenges is that the stories make me see the photos in entirely new ways. I hadn’t even noticed the eyes until I read this. Great insight!
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I love how you used the word “peace” and how you showed how an artists intent might not be what is read into the work. Great story.
@Samantha/samratkel from
Shadow Realities
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Thank you! I always seem to pick up any words in photo prompts, trying to use them…
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Yeah I like finding the odd piece in the prompt and letting it shine
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